Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Compromise!!~~

All it flows like the unconfined river,
And I am one of the pebbles,
Drifting along the times,
Sometimes sluggish, sometimes swiftly,
Losing my contour and the skin I got.


All it grows like the stretching tree,
And I am one of the leaves that shed last night,
I am unaware where this dark night will lead,
But losing my dry soul this autumn,
Will enhance its charm for sure.


All it soothes like this embellishing room,
And I am one of the curtains so elegant,
That’s dancing with this strong wind.
The dust sometimes hits me hard,
Still I am showing the image behind the veiled cards.


All it tastes like any other cappuccino,
And I am the coffee beams, one of its ingredients.
Mixed and blended to give it a savor,
I was appreciated for giving this recipe a name,
But still never accepted the way I was.


In the dim light of moon,
Shines that charismatic river,
The wind touching my chest,
Comes after plucking those leaves.


The pebbles unnoticed,
Or it may be the separated leaves.
I am pleased for the love they express,
But this very moment
I see their different shade,
Compromise under the name of love.


I stand still, facing out the window,
With the cappuccino set for appreciation,
The breeze knocks for space,
Hitting those cuddling curtains.


The juvenile curtains,
Or it be the luscious coffee,
I am pleased for the altruism they express,
But this very moment
I hear their silent voice,
Compromise under the noise of life.


I feel like being a mirror,
Never cleaned for years,
Still how can I show you, my boy,
The same old image.


I tried reflecting back what I got,
But failed this time too,
Since under the name of a relation,
I am compromising too.

( Now a part of Gaylaxy )

3 comments:

  1. Fateh! You're a gracious poet!

    This can be a bestseller poem!

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  2. u have good writing skill, ur poem is crispy and also emotional with a pain, i thank u for giving the world such a good poem

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  3. since I am deleting my account, i Don't want to forget all those beautiful comments received from my fellow poet friends of Ah poetry community:

    Sm1z~AnG€ℓ♥
    Beautiful Expression ! Very well done.

    ABHILASH!!!
    Beautiful Karan... vivid pictures of the whole plot rushed in front of my eyes...

    Wonderful fresh feeling...

    Loved it~~~

    Bhoodi
    !!!

    Seriously ....

    aweosme imagination and great work

    *Miss Sparkle*!!
    Brilliant poem! Srsly.. dis is so beautifully expressed! Wow!

    Rohan
    A very complete poem..a good read..enjoyed this loads.

    Er.DiVinEtA
    great worK

    kuchee koo
    But losing my dry soul this autumn,
    Will enhance its charm for sure.


    I see their different shade,
    Compromise under the name of love.


    i loved the above lines, the role they played in the making...very nice....

    shubham
    Great poem.. Loved reading it.. :)

    Vinay
    these are the best lines...

    But this very moment
    I hear their silent voice,
    Compromise under the noise of life.


    I feel like being a mirror,
    Never cleaned for years,
    Still how can I show you, my boy,
    The same old image.


    I tried reflecting back what I got,
    But failed this time too,
    Since under the name of a relation,
    I am compromising too.


    loved thinking of the moments when i have my coffee look at its color and think of the life had been through... i loved readin it...

    NiJo
    this is poetry....in its purest form....well done mate...

    $w@pnil
    brilliant work mate...

    ┌─●๋• вαlןєєт
    awesome..!!

    mridula
    I tried reflecting back what I got,
    But failed this time too,
    Since under the name of a relation,
    I am compromising too.

    very true....karan..
    n really beautiful...write..


    in need of love n care we.actually don"t realize when n how we change ourselves..in
    order to survive in relations...


    n we name it compromise..

    actually compromise is..
    "ART OF DIVING CAKE IN SUCH A WAY THAT EVERYONE THINKS...he has got the biggest share..."\\

    unsure as always
    wonderfull
    its so true

    confine myself
    STUNNED @ your work...
    I stand still, facing out the window,
    With the cappuccino set for appreciation,
    The breeze knocks for space,
    Hitting those cuddling curtains.

    what a unique blend of myriad roles!!!


    I feel like being a mirror,
    Never cleaned for years,
    Still how can I show you, my boy,
    The same old image.

    wow...heartfelt interrogation...


    I tried reflecting back what I got,
    But failed this time too,
    Since under the name of a relation,
    I am compromising too.

    ahh... oozing pain...

    about this work of yours...karan, I would just like to say...
    "PERFECTION UNBOUND"....

    regards,
    mayuri

    ~~Neh@~~
    Woho dat was long,,mite hav been quite a hardwork..
    It was nice,,though i wasnt too patient 2 pay attention n comprehend each word..

    But as many I did dey were beautiful..

    Fatima
    This is one beautiful poem. Loved it.

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